Comments on: It’s getting kinda hectic – episode ten of an epic sci fi story http://stanfaryna.wordpress.com/2012/10/24/its-getting-kinda-hectic-episode-ten-of-an-epic-sci-fi-story/ Match stick readings and contemplative meditations about great Bablion and obsequious Chatlanians Mon, 20 May 2013 10:13:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Stan Faryna http://stanfaryna.wordpress.com/2012/10/24/its-getting-kinda-hectic-episode-ten-of-an-epic-sci-fi-story/#comment-9120 Wed, 24 Oct 2012 11:48:32 +0000 http://stanfaryna.wordpress.com/?p=4357#comment-9120 I’m not familiar with Jonathan Carroll – I’ll have to check him out.

And dialogue, I can use a lot of help there. I’ll bring you into the Google documents on the rewrite.

]]> By: darethlee@comcast.net http://stanfaryna.wordpress.com/2012/10/24/its-getting-kinda-hectic-episode-ten-of-an-epic-sci-fi-story/#comment-9119 Wed, 24 Oct 2012 11:33:36 +0000 http://stanfaryna.wordpress.com/?p=4357#comment-9119 Stan have you read anything by Jonathan Carroll? He is a terrific writer doing something along your lines, not really. But really reminds me of what you are doing. Do yourself a favor and read one of his books. I am reading White Apples right now. Also another one by him is Bones of the Moon. Some of your dialogue needs work. Not much, just some minor stuff I notice. I know how writers feel about critics! And really, I would only try to help. If you want. Hugs and a sisterly smooch. d*

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